Adora Svitak
Hello my name is Betty. I saw a speech about Adora sivtak. She said age doesn't matter.And children should teach adults. In my opinoin, I think children should be treated better.
First,Adora said adults made problems. For example like Hitler. At that time children for example Anne Frank wrote her diary to show the world to how world war 2 was like.
Second , she said that children's minds are more creative and their minds are more opening. If the adults think of glass they think of crystal vases, but children think creative. Like "bacon boy" According to this reason children is more creative.
Last, children are leaders of the future. Adults should teach them well and listen to their opinions. Adora Svitak said "You must lend an ear today , because we are the leaders of tomorrow.
In conclusion, children should be treated better because they are creative , more open minded, and children are the leaders of the future.
I think your response is too short. Please try to explain your thoughts more fully.
ReplyDeleteYou wrote, "Adora said adults made problems. For example like Hitler." Does this mean that you think all adults are like Hitler????! I don't think you mean this, but this is what you wrote. It's a really shocking thing to read.
At the end of your essay you wrote that you remember an important sentence from Miss Svitak's speech. However, you don't explain why you remember it or what you think it means. If you explained these things, your response would be longer and more thoughtful.